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» Picnic Time!!
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» Where are you?
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» AH! HA HA! HA HA! HA HA!
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» Assassination: Retrieval
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» PROGRESSION: This world bores me!
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» Strange Signals
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» Organization 13+ BBQ!
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» Merely a Servant
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» New Options for Nobodies!
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» The Mura-tatorship...
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» *random portal appears*
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» A numberless amount of portals
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» Let's Play A Game!
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» How...Is it possible....What.....To.....Do......
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» What would your boss music sound like?
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» Alright, lets play god.
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» EXPANSION!!!!!
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» Suzu The Copycat.
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» That's it, we're doing something about this. 2.0
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» The Soulsmith's Forge
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» Could someone tell me where to go?
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» Did i hear bored? How about a lake party?
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» That's it, we're doing something about this.
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» We need some food.
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» Exene XCIII, The Holy Flames User
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» A Chance Encounter
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» Getting to know my City.
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» Now might be a better time.
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» The Grand Entrance
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» Why People Don't Respond to Kexan's Topics
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» Simply because i can... and im bored.
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» Finally...it has been done.
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» Open from DeviantArt
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» This is also what happens.
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» I apologize for Kané's......dumbassness.
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» The Golem's Awakening
by Acerva Sun May 10, 2015 4:59 am


    Tips on helping you to RP even better!

    BruxiXXVIII
    BruxiXXVIII
    Level 18
    Level 18


    Posts : 1637
    Join date : 2012-08-28
    Age : 27
    Location : My room.

    Character sheet
    Title: Winter's Wrath
    Primary Role: Tank
    Sub-role: DPS

    Tips on helping you to RP even better! Empty Tips on helping you to RP even better!

    Post by BruxiXXVIII Thu Jan 15, 2015 11:44 am

    HEY, GUYS! So, the purpose of this is to help you guys be better writers! (Suggestion made by Leore, which I appreciate Very Happy *winky face*)

    Among the problems I see, quite frequently, are run-on sentences. A run-on sentence is when you make a sentence with little punctuation, when there should be some. For example: "I ran into her and asked her kindly if I could run into the bakery and grab her some donuts because she looked so pretty." To edit this, you would add commas, where they were needed. Fixed: "I ran into her and asked her, kindly, if I could run into the bakery, to grab her some donuts, because she looked so pretty." Now, I added commas for these reasons: Before the word "to", because it is a preposition. (To, before, after, inside, etc..) I also added a comma before "because", because it begins an explanation, or a different thought. One would also use commas to make a "series." Example: "I went to the pet store and looked at some: dogs, cats, birds, rabbits, and fish."

    You may also use a comma when you are saying something "under your breath." Example: " I apologized for hitting the, strikingly beautiful, woman."

    You should also use a comma when you are addressing a person or group. Example: "No, love, I cannot." The comma is used because I am addressing the person as my "love."

    Then there are things like capitalizing. Only capitalize if: You are starting a new sentence, referring to something as a proper noun, referring to a person, referring to a place and referring to anything special.


    I will add more to this later, but these are some good tips for now ^^
    Oh, and don't be an idiot with this; these are here to help people, not to make you feel superior. It's also good to know the difference between slang and simply bad grammar.

    Addition(s?):

    The difference between it's and its.

    "It's" is a contraction of two words: it & is.
    It's important that we know the difference.
    "Its" is used to display possession.
    Despite staring down the tiger, I was afraid of its claws.

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